Friday 18 September 2015

Hush Hush

First find out about introspective.

make no sound
barely breathing
blanched and pale
pieces of distress
drop gentle
flutter about the pillow
curled and withdrawn
save them until dawn
for there are still distances
to fly
so stir no more
ask none
and worry even less
lightly sweep
the feathers shod
away under the mattress
then smooth out
the creeks and valleys
from sheets and foreheads
and close the soul’s window
for it has had enough
of tonight
hush

The Imagery

Bedtime.
Pale bird shedding feathers.
Eye / window.

The Content

I do not know what vibe this piece gives off to the average audience, but I think it is rather soothing than depressing. The beginning is bleak, but the rest is encouraging. Being emotionally strong is not about preaching sunshine and rainbows, but it is rather about climbing out of the lows. After a stressful day.. stop worrying and go to sleep! There is another day to get through tomorrow~

And why a bird instead of a human? A bird shedding feathers is more endearing than some random person shedding hair, I should think.

You will notice that a lot of my entries are set at night. During the day at school there is no peace and privacy. The afternoon is reserved for priorities, mostly homework. Then comes evening and night, the perfect window for writing. It is a relaxing yet productive way to recharge after a long day. I also find that keeping occupied is a great way for me to keep from entertaining stupid thoughts.. such as those few minutes before falling asleep. Better to write than to recount my life story.

My favourite phrase has to be "close the soul’s window for it has had enough of tonight". I can just imagine some bad weather outside and a terrible cacophony of noise, then finally closing the shutters. Get some eye shut, deary.

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