Sunday 28 February 2016

Run Run Run

First find out about introspective.

to the edge of the world
burn burn burn
the cold lifeless torment
fight fight fight
the frozen clutch closing in
try try try
to reach that distant twinkle
leave leave leave
the dead self behind
flee flee flee
from the damp spirit
break break break
the frost creeping in
pray pray pray
to remember why the flight
wade wade wade
through a viscous resistance
see see see
a glimmer through blurry sight
hear hear hear
muted ghosts through waters
feel feel feel
all there is left and
run

The Imagery

a cold spirit chases
through thick muffling fluids

The Content

Actually I think this makes for another trilogy in this order: Feel it All, Spring Nicht, Run Run Run. How strange, that I write pessimistically for dance beats and optimistically for emo ballads.

This entry makes a good wrap up. Spring Nicht makes an appearance in "to the edge of the world" and every word that suggests "cold". Feel it All is referred to at "feel feel feel / all there is left". Where it all began.

Usually I try not to repeat words, but consecutive repetition can make an exception. I particularly like the line "pray pray pray / to remember why the flight". The worst way to lose is to forget your motive. Without a reason why, no amount of opportunity can help you win.

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